My Novel

Okay so im making a novel and im wondering what suggestions or what (TOHO) Kaiju that you'd like in my novel.

Info about it right now:

NAME
Godzilla:War of the Kaiju

KAIJU THAT I HAVE ALREADY INTRODUECED IN IT
Godzilla
Mothra
Anguirus
Gabara
M.O.G.U.E.R.A
Zilla
Deathla
Gorath
Krstalak
Sanda
Death Ghidorah

MAIN CHARACTER
Yensuki

CITIES
Tokyo
France
Madagascar
Antartica
L.A
Egypt

MY SO FAR MADE AND INTRODUECED KAIJU
Tech
Hedoryu
Biomothgrandezilla
Mecha Mothra/Mecha Larve

NEXT KAIJU THAT WILL BE IN
Mecha Mothra/Mecha Larve
Baragon
Megaguirus

KAIJU SUGGESTION'S
Battra
Odsidius

and so far that is it...so any suggestions?

um if Krstalak is in You should add Obsidius

If Mothra's in it would be cool if Battra was in as well.

^Yep I can make room for Battra and Odsidius....

Oh and I opened the first monster battle with M.O.G.U.E.R.A and Krstalak and Gabara.

^ Cool. ^_^

^Thanks...the next monsters i'm just introduecing Death Ghidorah right now and hopefully Sanda in 10 minutes so I will have the NEXT KAIJU INTRODUECED section changed soon.

^Welcome. Death Ghidorah was cool but tey could have given him more flight time than they did in ROM.

Yeah they should have gave him more time... Do you have anymore suggestions?

That is true.

Suggestions? Let's see:

1.) Since Mothra and Battra are opposites have them go aganist each other instead of working together like the end of GvM ('92).

2.) Since you're putting Death Ghidorah in it give him make his charecter stand out more.

3.) It would be interesting to have all the kajiu talk to each other and the kaiju they are going against.

4.) Have them be sarcastic to each other?

Hope that helps.

Thanks for the help I will see what I can do with that.

No problem. Glad to help. Mecha Mothra? Sounds interesting. A mecha larva as well? Both will be very interesting.

Just wait 'till I post my concept art of Biomothgrandezilla.

Now that is interesting to see.

^Yep I will tell everyone something that he will has something of every Kaiju toho kaiju,the host and the cloverfield monsters have like a godzilla spike on his back and like that

Wow. Really interestinhg.

But im still trying to confince my friend to draw him

Oh.. Good luck getting him to draw it.

Thanks Battra

but once i'm done I wonder how I gonna share it with all the members on this forum.

You're welcome.

Put it here? This is the fan writing section of this forum right?

Or put it on FanFiction.net and give us a link to it. If you do have an account there.

well I can't put the novel here because it's gonna have 165 chapters so yeah thanks for theidea Battra I will put it there on Fanfiction.com

No problem. Wow. Big novel.

yep...my plan isn't working...

Sorry. Hope it winds up working.

Well the plan is to bug my friend enough until he draw's it...but he says it will look bad...

He can at least try. I'm sure it won't look that bad.